User talk:Aoki Li

Your edits to Akbar the Great

Your edits have been reverted, since they had the effect of removing referenced material and reintroducing original research into the article, which is contrary to Wikipedia's policy of verifiabiity. Also, leaving a vague comment in the edit summary such as Anachronistic does not help matters - all I did was to move content from one part of the article to a more appropriate section, as well as remove content that had remained unreferenced for long. I'm not sure what you intended to do - please clarify your actions either on the article talk page or on my talk page. Regards, SBC-YPR (talk) 17:17, 15 October 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for clarifying. I see your point - perhaps the lack of clarity of the connection is due to the fact that the victory over Chittor is not mentioned earlier in the article, whereas it ought to find a place under the section Military Achievements. I have restored an {{underconstruction}} tag, which was removed earlier, to the top of the page to indicate that I will be working on this issue over the next few days. Once the conquest of Chittor is mentioned in the Military Achievements section, I think the connection should become more clear. Regards, SBC-YPR (talk) 14:12, 16 October 2009 (UTC)