User talk:Aoa24/sandbox

You need to go over and proof read the text because there are a few repeated words, grammatical and spelling problems. You pose a question in the first paragraph of the text but never actually answer the question. This needs to be addressed. You also need to use some more information from the sources that you outline in your literature. Also you can give some more information with regards to positive coverage of collegiate athletes because most of the information given in the popularity section is mostly about controversies. Overall, i think this is good work, citations and very good, all the information is relevant to the topic and the information is void of bias and most of the sides of the story is given. MrCampion10 (talk) 18:32, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Please...

... do not put this into College athletics. Please include this in College athletics in the United States. If you wish to put it into College athletics, please include a discussion of the professionalization of university sport in Mexico and Australia. Football, rugby, cricket are three sports there. You may also want to talk about China in the context of professionalization of university sport against a social backdrop. --LauraHale (talk) 01:59, 19 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]