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Week 8 peer review assignment
[edit]- A lead section that is easy to understand- It is easy to understand, but should add more information to it. Like the information that is under the wiki photo. Can integrate that information into the paragraph.
- A clear structure- The Subject section is good. The 1st paragraph for Patron seems more like it would be under the section header for History, or could make a sub section called "Artist". Your call
- Balanced coverage- I would say so. Discussed the painting and what is in it. Sentences were easy to understand. Could flesh out, if possible.
- Neutral content- Overall, the content stays pretty neutral. No use of emotion based or opinionated language. Uses scholar arguments when there are ideas shared.
- Reliable sources- All of the sources are various articles/books from JSTOR, besides a couple preexisting ones. So that is good. All seem reliable when reviewing.