User talk:AnthAJN/sandbox
Current Status of this Sandbox:
Currently this sandbox contains those sections of the Sex Trafficking article I have been working on.
I have changed the criticisms sub-section of the anti-sex trafficking efforts text and already uploaded those changes to the actual article.
I am also editing the sections originally labeled as 'Myths" and "Prevention"
The myth section discussed misconceptions rather than myths and so I have relabeled the section in my sandbox. also most of the content does not appear to be actual misconceptions. I will look to add the useful contributions of this section that were not appropriate to the section heading to other parts of the article. Otherwise I have completely rewritten the section. At this point I need to add citations to what I have added before posting the changes to the actual article.
The main problems with the prevention section is that it 1. doesn't read like an encyclopedia section, instead it sounds like an add for services. its not clear what the difference between prevention and anti-sex trafficking efforts are.
I am thinking about rewriting this section as "Resources for victims of trafficking" and making the necessary changes to give the section an encyclopedic tone while still providing links to the information contained there if it is not already listed elsewhere.
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