User talk:Anonymous Lotus

This user is a student editor in Soka_University_of_America/WRIT101-02_(Fall_2019) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:09, 4 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

Hi, Reika’s Wiki team!

I found your topic really interesting. Particularly, I like the history section because it is well-elaborated and chronologically organized. Also, the inclusion of different charts or graphs is effective as it gives readers statistical information in an organized way. As for the lead section, it is mostly concise, but, sometimes, there is little too much information included in one sentence. Also, I think it would be great if your lead section could present more background information regarding the content in the rest of the article. In addition, there are still some grammar mistakes in the article. Overall, I found your article well-written! Urihc (talk) 18:57, 18 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]