User talk:Anonymous6666666666666666/sandbox

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Overall you do a very good job using facts without having any bias present. Your sources and citations work and are reliable. I would maybe work on condensing it a little bit, the information is all important and you use good strong facts but some parts feel more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Overall very solid work. The topic is very interesting and the overall structure was very strong. Very few gramatical errors. You did a good job of strictly using facts to provide the information. You also have good organization and a nice flow from paragraph to paragraph and from fact to fact. Very good job.