User talk:AnnieGx
Feedback on your article
[edit]Hello AnnieGx, Thank you for writing your article in your sandbox! I have read the article and would like to give some feedback to improve your article to Wikipedia standards and customs. While your tutor will judge it content wise, I will look if it meets the quality standards we have on Wikipedia. I standard look for a series of subjects that need improvement or are okay.
- Intro sentence: good!
- Links: a good start, a bit more would be welcome, like for example: plantation
- Headers: good, but no need for capitalisation of "Voyage"
- References: good, but in the first line under Content a reference is needed.
- Context/timeframe: The question that remains for me is why he wrote the book?
- How was the book received: A good start but more is needed. Like why this work is important (and where?). And how is it seen with the critical analysis?
Greetings - Romaine (talk) 12:22, 10 August 2020 (UTC)