User talk:AnnickD

Your draft article, Draft:Robert Montagu

Hello, AnnickD. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Robert Montagu".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. » Shadowowl | talk 08:26, 27 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"Robert Montagu"

Hello I am fairly new to providing content for Wikipedia. How do I know if the above draft needs amending? If it's OK, how do I get it published? Sorry for my ignorance. AnnickDAnnickD (talk) 10:28, 27 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Robert Montagu

Hello, AnnickD. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Robert Montagu".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Legacypac (talk) 16:16, 27 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Help me!

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How do I know if there is an issue with a draft?

Please help me with getting a draft finalised and the page uploaded

AnnickD (talk) 21:28, 27 March 2018 (UTC)AnnickD[reply]

I have added a messagebox that allows you to submit the draft for a review by an experienced editor. Before you do so, you'll want to address several issues with the page:

Many of the sources are not reliable by Wikipedia's standards, not indepdendent, or don't confirm what they're cited for. Thus significant parts of the content are not verifiable.
There's code in the page that clearly doesn't belong. It should be removed.
The tone is rather promotional and not the dry, factual tone expected from an encyclopedia article. It reads as if it were written by Montagu's PR agent.
You may also want to take a look at WP:Referencing for beginners; the video on that page explains how to easily create nicely-formatted footnotes instead of the bare URLs in the current footnotes.

I hope this helps. Huon (talk) 22:20, 27 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Robert Montagu has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Robert Montagu. Thanks! Legacypac (talk) 22:12, 27 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

How can I change the title from Robert Montagu to Robert Montagu Therapist?

AnnickD (talk) 22:26, 27 March 2018 (UTC)AnnickD[reply]

See Help:Moving a page. I have moved the draft to Draft:Robert Montagu (therapist); that's the usual style of disambiguation on Wikipedia. Huon (talk) 23:27, 27 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Robert Montagu (March 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Huon was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Sources largely are not reliable, not independent of Montagu, or they don't confirm the statements they're cited for.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Robert Montagu and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Robert Montagu, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Huon (talk) 23:18, 27 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, AnnickD! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Huon (talk) 23:18, 27 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Robert Montagu (therapist)

Hello, AnnickD. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Robert Montagu".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Sincerely, Masum Reza^☎ 17:19, 6 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]