User talk:Anni1010/sandbox/SamiraWIley

Introduction

Hi Anni1010. As with the Lauren Morelli draft, your work is solid. I would recommend expanding the introduction section to better summarize the article. The current introduction (sometimes referred to as a "lead" or "lede") is accurate, but it doesn't summarize much except baseline biographical details and her most famous work. We want the introduction to serve as an executive summary for most of the content. We don't have to summarize everything, especially in an article as short as this, but a sentence or two on things outside of OitNB (or is it OITNB?) might be very useful for a reader. Keep up the great work. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:11, 17 April 2015 (UTC)