User talk:Annalisemetzger
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[edit]Hello, Annalisemetzger, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 04:29, 17 February 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review by Brent Schubert
[edit]Hey, not sure where I should put my review, but for now I'll put it here. Anyways, I think you both have a good grasp on the STORC, and have great knowledge about the topic. This is going to be really a cool page when it's done because it is quite innovative and unique. I'm not exactly sure what goes on at the STORC, but you could possibly add in a few more subheadings, which would extend the length of the page. I'm assuming you're going to into further detail on some of the bullet points listed, which would be a good addition to what you've already completed as well. I would also talk about how the STORC is incorporated with other schools and the educational aspect it presents to the community. Lastly, maybe a couple pictures would add some value to the page. Other than that, I like the strong lead y'll have, and I believe you guys are going to make a great page that represents the STORC very well. Great job!
Thank You!
[edit]Thank you for your peer edit, Brent!
You are right in that more information is required - I am currently working on that! I'm currently having trouble figuring out the level of detail that I should go in to for each portion, but soon something more will be up! Of course, I am writing this page in collaboration with Tori Sepulveda, so her portions do contain more background information into other aspects of STORC and its operations. That being said, I don't know if we've thought about adding a section discussion STORC and it's ties to other educational systems in the area! This is now being seriously considered! Lastly, I believe we are in the process of picking the best possible pictures to showcase the magnificence that breeds at STORC.
Thank you again, Brent!