User talk:Anhalford
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Wb0990's commentary on your edits for the article.
I would reword your first sentence, it seems like a lot of fluff. Being succinct rather than pushing for a greater word volume will make this more readable.
The same thing goes for phrases like "on the other hand"
good sources
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:11, 24 January 2019 (UTC)
Luis Michey Tovar's Peer review for Pluralingualism
[edit]Great first start! To begin I would suggest adding a section "Plurilingualism in the Media." This would pair great with the toolkit assignment and often I've found sections like this in other Wikipedia articles. It is a great way to give examples of the concept without trying to explain the situation in a dedicated space. This would also supplement well with the definition. Additionally, I could see some use in expanding on the use in a diplomatic setting, maybe famous examples of conflict resolution specialists that utilized plurilingualism in a specific case. Great start though!