User talk:AndreH29
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[edit]@AndreH29, AshleyPT, JLPhys2018, and MTZ15: Nice work on your draft. Since you've moved the work to mainspace, this feedback applies to the TRPV2 page.
- Your lead section could be longer. It should summarize all the major points of the article, so there should be more there.
- The links in the Discovery section didn't copy over properly. They need to be re-inserted.
- You could use more links to other articles. Any term that the average reader might be unfamiliar with should be linked the first time it appears in the article, so that the reader can learn more if they want to. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:29, 11 April 2018 (UTC)