User talk:Amavie thien.cc/Sandbox

Hi! I have added a version in the page history of your sandbox. To find it, you can either go to your sandbox page, select the tab marked "History", and then click on the version created by me, or by clicking this link. I have reverted the sandbox back to the version you created, as the deleted copy I put in isn't particularly brilliant (no notability, and bordering on advertising).

As for your article, it is not ready for moving into Wikipedia. I have reworded some of it to make it less like a press release and a bit more in tone like an encyclopedia article, but more is still needed. Also, notability has not been shown, as far as I can tell. I cannot tell from the references not in English, but of those references that I can read, none of them are suitable sources; they are all press releases or business directory entries. For this to avoid deletion, you need at least 3 articles about Amaris that are NOT press releases and are from reliable third party sources. The one thing on there that comes closest to showing a little bit of notability (the bit about ranking by Challenges magazine) does not show any references at all. Please note that this in itself is not enough to show notability, but depending on a suitable reference being used, it could be used to help support a notability claim. You would need to show a reference to the Challenges Magazine entry, either online or to the print edition; a link to a statement about this on the Amaris website would not suffice.

Let me know when you want me to have another look at it, or if you have any questions about my thoughts. Stephen! ^Coming... 06:51, 20 May 2015 (UTC)