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Hello Amana22. Do you have any links to the businesspeople whose articles you edit? Cheers, 1292simon (talk) 21:03, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Simon. I totally missed this for some reason! Probably because I'm not used to people posting on my Talk page. This is the only businessperson I've worked on so far: Steven Murphy. He is another westerner doing a lot of work in China. There are a couple of others I'm interested in, but sadly I don't have a lot of spare time at the moment. Bye for now. Amana22 (talk) 17:51, 13 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@1292simon: Hi Simon, I realise you may not have seen my response without me notifying you. Thanks. Amana22 (talk) 11:15, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nicolai Peitersen (January 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Praxidicae were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Nicolai Peitersen and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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CUPIDICAE💕 14:48, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Amana22! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! CUPIDICAE💕 14:48, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Nicolai Peitersen has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Nicolai Peitersen. Thanks! Worldbruce (talk) 03:02, 21 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 04:01, 24 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nicolai Peitersen (July 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Eternal Shadow were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Don’t see the subject passing WP:GNG. References are iffy, some are useful, some aren’t. Tone is somewhat better, but still iffy in the first two sections.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Nicolai Peitersen and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Eternal Shadow Talk 15:10, 26 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Nicolai Peitersen

Hello, Amana22. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Nicolai Peitersen".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 20:02, 3 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]