User talk:Alyssabri99
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[edit]Hello, Alyssabri99, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:51, 3 September 2019 (UTC)
Dec 1 Feedback
[edit]This is good progress. Be careful about long lists of exhbitions. Wikipedia doesn't like long lists, as it reads like CV/resume. Try to encorporate them into paragraphs describing the exhibitions, or summarizing the overall exhibition record.
Next step is to peer review one of your classmate’s articles. Like your own, these will be on their sandbox pages. You should be able to see who is assigned each article on the Assigned Articles tab, so click on their username to find their sandbox. Remember, you had a training on this, which you can rely on. Feel free to email me if you have questions. --Theredproject (talk) 23:02, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
Don't see a Peer Review
[edit]Alyssabri99 I have looked through your contributions, and I don't see a peer review of one of your classmates' work. If I have missed the edits, please let me know. --Theredproject (talk) 22:05, 14 December 2019 (UTC)
Some feedback
[edit]Hi Alyssabri99 I just checked and your edits and want to offer a few pieces of guidance that you will need to follow in order to haver your edits successfully posted without being reverted.
- As I said in previous feedback, you need to condense the long list of exhibitions. Wikipedia doesn't like long lists like that. See this article for an example of how to deal with project descriptions: Rebecca Allen (artist)
- You need to copyedit for grammar. Take these this sentence, for example: "The prototype for the university press at MIT was implemented by the graphic designers, known for their meticulous and straightforward style of their typography."
You are going to need to work on this before your edits will be accepted. --Theredproject (talk) 22:26, 14 December 2019 (UTC)
Hi Theredproject on Thursday, I peer-edited Steven Gordillo's article (Rebeca Mendez) and edited my work, then moved my work over to the article. --Alyssabri99 (talk) 22:37, 20 December 2019 (UTC)