User talk:Allyborghi
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[edit]Hello, Allyborghi, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:33, 7 February 2017 (UTC)
POLSCI 489 Peer Review: Woke
[edit]I thought your additions on Erykah Badu were really useful to status of "woke" as a popular culture reference in current times. I think there are some interesting ways to make this salient word (or even a movement for social awareness)'s Wikipedia page more up-to-date. Here are a few articles about Jordan Peele's Get Out and his choice to use "Redbone" by Childish Gambino as the opening song:
http://www.vox.com/culture/2017/3/7/14759756/get-out-benevolent-racism-white-feminism
I think the cultural appropriation element can be expanded upon too, depending on where your vision lies for the article. I think that as this page gets more and more views (it seems to have a lot already) it would be useful to divide the page into headlines, such as etymology, uses in popular culture, controversy, etc.
Ujwalamurthy (talk) 17:32, 9 March 2017 (UTC)
489 Peer Review (Abamzai)
[edit]Hey, I really liked your topic because I think it's very relevant today. I have seen the word used in many contexts on campus and around social media, so it's good that you're attempting to address its history and relevance to society's issues.
Here are a few things you can adjust to make your contribution better:
-For the definition section, cite the source for "woke" at the end of each sentence. Also, clarify "past of wake" with "past tense of wake. "Additionally, I would also suggest linking the UrbanDictionary and the Oxford Dictionary to their respective Wikipedia pages so that readers could have access to learn more about those two sources.
-I suggest re-titling your second section "Origins of Woke." Also, the last sentence is repetitive.
-Your popular culture section has some good examples, but I would suggest either cutting a few out or making each example more clear in its own paragraphs.
-Overall, I think you have solid content, but it just needs to be proofread so that it is clearer to read and understand. Additionally, add more sources so you can back up the information you have contributed.
If you have any questions, please reach out to me on my talk page --Abamzai (talk) 20:18, 10 March 2017 (UTC)