User talk:Allierose17/sandbox
Peer Review
[edit]The entries you wrote are informative about the subject of teaching materials such as the lesson plans and the poster boards. The entries are well written and have a good pace. The Sources you cited are academic and peer reviewed and go more in depth with what the subject is about. Both of the paragraphs are well written and contain good grammar and punctuation. The paragraphs have enough content for the subjects and I got to learn more about education systems. They are fleshed out, but one thing I want to add is leave out words such as extremely and great because they give out a personal tone in the text rather a neutral tone.