User talk:Aliyahm/Chelsea cutler

Hello! I reviewed your article and I think you found a lot of great information. I also think you did a great job linking other articles that are used. That is very helpful for someone that may not know what is being referenced. All your links work and your sources are all reliable and legitimate to me. I think you could separate the chunk of information that you have into separate sections. The beginning when you are talking about her early life and then you get more into her career towards the end of the paragraph. Those could be two different sections and that will help organize it better. I think you are off to a great start and and have a lot fo good quality information. I think separating the sections will also help with finding more research so that you are more zoned in on finding articles for each section rather than just Cutler as a whole. Great article start though. BettyChipman (talk) 18:07, 31 January 2020 (UTC)Betty Chipman

Hello Aliya! Thank you for helping to build a page for Chelsea Cutler. As a fan myself, I am excited to help promote her career. You have wonderful concepts mentioned here but I would love to see it broken down into easy-to-read sections. For example, create separate headings for Career, Personal Life, Musical Accomplishments etc. You could use this distinction to create a section that focuses purely on her music and collaborations, as well as information on her tours. There are a few minor grammatical and spelling errors (such as run on sentences) so just be careful to review before uploading! Overall, strong work. Mntipps (talk) 05:45, 7 February 2020 (UTC)

Pre-move Review

Hello Aliyahm, I looked over your article history and see that you mostly worked on one section and added an infobox. These changes are great, but we were hoping to see more new content.

I would recommend finding some new sources, looking at an article about a related subject, seeing which sections/content may be applicable to yours and writing it.

Also, I have written a detailed explanation of some improvements that can be made as well as the process to make your changes live.

When ready, you can go ahead and move over your changes to the live page or let ping me here on Wikipedia if you'd like me to review them again. Let me know if you have any questions!  一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙‍♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 05:44, 14 February 2020 (UTC)