User talk:Alilykat/sandbox

Prof Garcia's Comments

Week 2

Well done taking a look at the iPad Pro page. Looks like there were a couple of problems with the article, as you point out. Your answers to the questions in your sandbox, however, were a little lacking in depth and thoroughness. They were all just the beginning of an answer, really, and could have used a lot more thought behind them. I liked your last answer about journalistic bias and wished you had gone more into depth on that! For future assignments, please write more thoroughly. Explain your ideas, give examples, offer up suggestions: whatever you do, make sure you write more! Alfgarciamora (talk) 19:33, 30 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Lily's Reply

Thanks prof! I now know what you're looking for. I'll make sure to keep that in mind. @Alfgarciamora: Alilykat (talk) 13:04, 31 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Week 5

@Alilykat: Wow! Looks like you are going to take the strategy of adding a little bit to a lot of articles, correct? I hope you can do this without losing your direction. Just make sure to remain organized with all your sources, the page numbers, the details, etc. And remember that your sandbox is the place where you can go to post the details of your research! Alfgarciamora (talk) 14:17, 21 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Week 8

Nicely done for this week, Alilykat! It looks as though you have completely reformulated those two pages you're working on. Great job with the info boxes. Loved that you learned how to do that. And also with the picture. From here on to the end, I want you to make sure you add substantive sentences to these pages, not just lists and such, and make sure you cite them correctly. You are going to finish strong! You just have a little more leg work to do. Well done! Alfgarciamora (talk) 17:42, 20 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]