User talk:Alice10flowers
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:16, 18 September 2018 (UTC)
Karen Walton
[edit]Minor revisions necessary.
- Great use of sources!
- Add a clear "lead section."
- Delete the : from the headings.
- Add release years to the filmography and make it into a bulleted list.
- The main problem is that most of the new content is about Ginger Snaps and the film already has a Wikipedia page. In particular, I recommend moving the "Critical Reception of Ginger Snaps" section to the Ginger Snaps page (although it won't count toward this assignment). Can you find any more information about her life, career, approach, etc? You can go ahead and move what you have to main space now, but keep researching and expanding the sections that are about her as filmmaker more generally.