User talk:Algreen11/sandbox
I will be editing the hero page on wikipedia.
The weaknesses of the article includes poor usage of illustrations and the absence of in-text citations.
I will be editing the Introductory section, the classical heroes section, and the modern heroes section along with creating more useful images.
For the intro, I am looking to create a more chronologically ordered introduction that gives a better impression of the progression of heroes through time.
For the classical heroes, I am going to be totally reworking this section by discussing the main greek heroes of Achilles, odysseus, and hector. The concepts of heroes, like their close relation to god and often character flaws (where the term Achilles Heel comes from) need to be exposed.
For the modern heroes, the "larger than life" aspect of heroes will be discussed (think batman, spiderman) and the actual message of Vanity Fair will be analyzed
For the images, rather than including random heroes not discussed in the text, I will change the images to more relevant heroes. Specifically, the image in the classical heroes section will be one of achilles from thousands of years ago.
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