User talk:Akemp1104/sandbox

=What I changed=

For this article I decided to do a complete revision and contribute to each section in the article and even revise how the paragraph layout would look. I did this because it was easier when editing to revise the layout to better fit the layout of my paper at this point. I may decide later it would be better to keep more of the original article and will edit more then.

Akemp1104 (talk) 21:56, 17 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

What you've written so far looks good, Ashley. Let me or James Haston know if you have questions. Dperkins16 (talk) 01:05, 28 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]