User talk:Ajhwik
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[edit]Hello, Ajhwik, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:44, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
Zainab's Peer Review
[edit]The article does a good job of giving background information on the incident with accurate dates and numbers. Description of the subject is concise and as the reader I have a clear understanding of what will be discussed in the article. Some changes I would recommend is to include one or two sentences on Boko Haram, so the reader who may have no prior knowledge can have an idea of what the Islamist group is. Also, I think it would be interesting to include the aftermath of the prison break and effects it had on the country and people. Everything that is in the article is relevant to the article topic and the tone is very neutral and is not leaning towards one side or the other. The link to the citations work, which is something I didn’t know how to do on my own draft. Your sources are legitimate by using reliable news sources and updating the sources is a good idea. The information is up to date and relevant and the viewpoints don’t seem to be overrepresented or underrepresented. Zainabmojaddedi (talk) 18:28, 6 April 2020 (UTC)