User talk:Ahanania/sandbox

Elliptical Galaxy Review

Some notes:

- General characteristics
  - "motion of stars is predominantly radial..." line should have a citation (or needed tag)
  - grammar in 1st paragraph? "... dominated by rotation; furthermore, there is ..."
  - 2nd paragraph: if it is controversial, say that they "may be formed by the same processes" instead of "they are"
  - link in Ho 2010 doesn't lead anywhere, no good info on it.
- Evolution
  - unbox "are thought"?
  - 2nd paragraph: reword Milky Way "consuming" sentence
- Other
  - ref 9 (17 on full page) doesn't have most of the info in the citation. you can use the link to auto-fill the form in the make citation thing

Other than that, looks fine. Kg5601 (talk) 23:36, 15 March 2017 (UTC)