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WikiMed - Progress

TODO

~~add dead links (eg, foreign body embolism, tissue embolism)~~
~~finish bibliography~~
~~History section~~
~~response to peer review~~
Add structure to clinical section NOT DONE

WEDS 16 DEC 2020

added dead links (eg, foreign body embolism, tissue embolism)
history section: completed; kept brief as it is covered already in detail in other wiki articles, and this article is concerned with Embolus specifically
references: added several citations for the history section (incl. primary reference to Virchow's lectures)
response posted to peer review on embolus talk page
update posted to embolus talk page for future reviewers

PEER REVIEW

~~editing: Wiskott-Aldrich (Colleen)~~
~~being reviewed by: Max~~

SUN 13 DEC 2020

Added PE histo image to Clinical Significance section w/ caption
Added 'rough' relative frequency to table

WEDS 09 DEC 2020

pushed edits to live wiki page

TUES 08 DEC 2020

bibliography research
additions to intro section and clinical significance

Afmcraig (talk) 17:41, 9 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

THURS 03 DEC 2020

all updates made on Sandbox page for Embolus
Started new section: Nomenclature
Re-structure of Classification section started: made table
Started new section: Clinical Significance
Skeleton for new section: History

Afmcraig (talk) 18:40, 4 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

SUN 29 NOV 2020

chosen source topic: Embolus
planned updates/expansions posted to talk page: Talk:Embolus