User talk:Aetska/sandbox
A couple of suggestion
[edit]@Aetska: @Teodorela: About this request, the article in this sandbox look like very good. I suggest
- to add the picture that you can see in Jelena Milić
- to add a reference for this sentence which has significantly contributed to the fall of the regime of Slobodan Milosevic.
Then we can think to pubblish the article --Ignazio Ligotti (Unipd) (talk) 13:37, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
some more suggestions
[edit]I think a lot of the text is too similar to the info on this page -
https://www.ceas-serbia.org/en/about-ceas/ceas-team
changing one word in a sentence only is still considered plagiarism so I think it needs to be adapted more.
Also I think the info on her marriage should not go in her career, it could go in a separate section on personal life. --Calfux22 (talk) 12:21, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Aetska: @Teodorela:
- please change more about the text you have taken from the source above and then you can pubblish the page. --Ignazio Ligotti (Unipd) (talk) 09:45, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
- @Ignazio Ligotti (Unipd):, we modified the whole text and think that now the article is ready to be published. --Aetska (talk) 17:43, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
- @Aetska:perfect , thank you --Ignazio Ligotti (Unipd) (talk) 09:18, 7 December 2021 (UTC)