User talk:Adriana.a41/sandbox
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Chelsea's Peer Review
[edit]Your content looks great, no bias, no personal statements or opinion, very neutral-toned. Each section has a clear category for a newly developed page along with proper citations and links to other sources. The contributions I would include to your article would be classifying each section you wrote with a citation from where you got the ideas from. Elaborate just a little bit more on the new approaches section and the industrial section, the rest of your content looks excellent. --Quinterochelsea (talk) 05:40, 2 April 2019 (UTC) [Quintero]