User talk:Adlumzana/Religion in Kosovo
KTC's comment
[edit]Where did the leading quote come from? It's entirely out of place and not really relevant to an encyclopedic article. An encyclopedia article is written as an overview of a subject. You are not directly communicating with your reader in first person, so "you and your community ..." etc. are not in the right tone. I still don't understand why you're including basically a copy of Kosovar constitution.
Most of the article doesn't include wikilinks. Take a few moment to go over it and add in some relevant links. I don't understand what you are trying to do in the "Historical Islamic Monuments in Pristina" section with the four bullet points.
Focus on what is the subject of your article. Is this article Religion in Kosovo or is it Religion in Pristina? Pick one and write accordingly.
There's too many links in the See also section that's probably not relevant. Cut down to what's immediately relevant to the subject. Similarly for external links. References that are the same and be combined to only appear once in the References section. See Wikipedia:CITE#Repeated_citations for details on how to do it. -- KTC (talk) 08:56, 1 March 2014 (UTC)