User talk:Adebbas
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[edit]Hello, Adebbas, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:08, 10 September 2020 (UTC)
Here is my peer review for what you have so far: The updated version of the lead is a great improvement to the article's original. It adds more historical context, gathered from the new references, while remaining concise. There is some information that is brought up, like the name of the architects, that does not come up later in the body of the article. There is also no delineation of the sections of the article in the introduction, but that is not necessary as the entire body is contained within one section. All of the content added to the body of the article is relevant to the topic, and there does not seem to be anything in the article that does not belong. The new information also seems to be up to date and trustworthy. The article is well written and in a neutral tone, and does not display any bias towards any particular point of view. The secondary sources provided are reliable, and provide a significant amount of information on this topic. The modifications do not have any links so far. There are only two sources listed so far, but they are extensive. There are currently no pictures or other outside media. Overall, I do not see any issues with the modifications to the article. All of them add more, well-sourced, and relevant content, which provide a better picture of the article topic. Lruschak (talk) 18:40, 29 October 2020 (UTC)