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Akhun Kheils of Harrori Khakoo village council, Mansehra district, Pakistan:

Village Council: Harori Khakoo village council is one of 175 village councils of Mansehra district¹ of KPK province of Pakistan. It is about 2 miles west of Battal. Battal is about 30 miles north from Mansehra on N35/AH4 Karakoram Highway². Harrori Khakoo village council includes 3 villages (Harrori upper, Harrori lower, and Khakoo) and 7 hamlets (Shingrehta, Chandni, Danna, Bakrian, Mayra, Nian Sukh,, and Bhati) ³. The village council can be grouped into 5 wards: Ward 1 will be Harrori upper- Qaisir Abad, Ward 2 will be Harrori lower- Mayra, Ward 3 will be Khakoo - Nian Sukh, Ward 4 will be Shingrehta- Bakrian - Chandni - Danna, and Ward 5 will be Bhati - Gali. The village council and its zones are mapped in Wikimapia.

Akhun Kheils of Village Council: In Harrori Khakoo village council the people are called Akhun Kheils and all Akhun Kheils are descendants of Sayyed Akbar Shah AKA Akhun Salak Baba who is buried in Akhun Salak Baba Cemetery, about 0.5 miles south of lower Kabul Gram, on the west bank of Indus river and north bank of Ital Khwar (River) ⁴. The detail location of the cemetery is mapped on google maps. Akhun Salak Baba's son was Mohammad Ashraf Shah (Swato Baba) and Swato Baba's son was Mohammad Awila Shah and Awila Shah's son was Mohammad Safa Shah. Mohammad Safa Shah had 3 sons. First son (Mirza Shah) whose descendants live in Mohalla (neighborhood) Gohar Abad of upper Harrori. His second son was Mohtarim Shah whose descendants live in lower Harrori. His 3rd son was Azam Shah. Azam Shah had 4 sons. First son was Yousuf Shah whose descendants live in Shingreta. His second son was Shah Husain whose descendants live in upper Harrori. His 3rd son was Ghulam Husain Shah whose descendants live in Khakoo. His 4th son was Hasan Ali Shah. Hasan Ali had 3 sons. His first son was Qudratullah Shah whose descendants live in Mohalla Rehman Abad of upper Harrori. His second son was Nazir Shah whose descendants live in Bhati. His 3rd son was Sher Ali Shah whose descendants live in Nasim Abad. Shah Husain had 4 sons. His first son was Khani Zaman Shah whose descendants live in Mohalla Ali Abad of upper Harrori. His second son was Mohammad Zaman Shah whose descendants live in Mohalla Bahadur Abad of upper Harrori. His 3rd son was Mohammad Jan Shah whose descendants live in Mohalla Sultan Abad of upper Harrori. His 4th son was Malak Aman Shah whose descendants live in Mohalla Qasir Abad of upper Harrori. Mohtarim Shah had 3 sons. His first son was Shah Wali whose descendants live in Mayra. His second son was Qasim Shah whose descendants live in lower Harrori. His 3rd son was Atta Shah whose descendants also live in lower Harrori^5,6.

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¹Village/Neighborhood councils: Local government, elections, rural development- government of KPK.
²wikimapia.org
³The location can be viewed on google earth, google maps, and wikimapia
⁴Google earth
⁵This family tree was compiled by Sayyed Iqbal Shah, retired former MTO and Director and currently Naib Nazim, Harrori Khakoo village council.
⁶Qasir Shah uncle (RIP) of Mohalla Qasir Abad had collected this information and is available in hand written document.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Adam Khan (July 23)

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It isn't clear what this draft is about. Is it about a person, or a village council, or a family tree? Without a proper lede sentence, it is not possible to assess notability.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 02:31, 23 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Adamkhandr, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 02:31, 23 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Adam Khan (July 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. Please see the guide to writing better articles for information on how to better format your submission.

The comment the reviewer left was:

It still isn't clear what this draft is about. Is it about a person, maybe Adam Khan, as implied by the title, or a village council, as implied by the first sentence, or a family history?

Please do not resubmit this draft without a complete rewrite that permits a reviewer to understand what its topic is.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 03:08, 24 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Adam Khan (July 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. Please see the guide to writing better articles for information on how to better format your submission.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft is still very hard to understand. It is apparently about the village. However, it doesn't start out by saying where the village is located. What country is it in, and what region of the country?

Provide a proper lede sentence stating the name of the village and where it is located.

The references are not properly formatted, and do not help the reader. If you are having difficulty with them, read referencing for beginners, and ask for help if necessary.

As noted in a previous discussion at the Teahouse, the detailed genealogical information is not helpful.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 18:24, 24 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Adam Khan (July 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Omni Flames was:

This submission provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. Please see the guide to writing better articles for information on how to better format your submission.

The comment the reviewer left was:

See Robert McClenon's comments below. I feel that they still haven't been addressed.

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Omni Flames (talk) 08:15, 25 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Harrori Khakoo has been accepted

Harrori Khakoo, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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