User talk:Acvanauken/sandbox

What other information could I use to add to my high school's wiki page?? any suggestions? Acvanauken (talk) 18:52, 3 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your organization is good, maybe start out with the history instead of burying it farther down. Overall it reads like a Wikipedia article. -Kmbyers — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kmbyers (talk • contribs) 18:30, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

There's a lot of information here, but it reads like a advocate of the school. Words like "probably" and "mostly" should be removed. Just stick to facts. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sloth-Jaw (talk • contribs) 18:41, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This is a pretty good page. You should however find a few more sources, and you could link other Wikipedia pages to things like locations or athletics conferences. Also you could try to find a picture of the school or a mascot. Idonthaveacomputer (talk) 18:35, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]