User talk:Abuckley3/Hyperlite Wake Mfg.
Pre-move Review
[edit]Hello Abuckley3, I noticed that you had not copied over the original article, so I created a clone before looking over your change history. I see that you've made some significant changes from the original article. However, there is definitely some work that needs to be done before "going live".
- Copy over the infobox and categories that were on the original article.
- Find more citations to add as references, currently there are none.
- Do some copy-editing, for instance, the "History" section has "[edit]" in it.
Here are a few additional suggestions that will really make your additions shine:
- Find other articles about a related subject, see which sections that may be applicable to yours, add those sections and fill them with content. Perhaps starting looking at Category:Water sports equipment manufacturers.
- Use the short description template for your paragraph above the Table of Contents.
- Find and add some relevant images.
- Add some internal links, for instance "Redmond, WA".
- Add a "See also" section of related articles and a "External links" section, probably of the official website and if there is something else relevant.
- Try to link to any relevant WikiProjects.
- Review the WikiEdu Editing Guide and see if anything else stands out.
Please ping me on Wikipedia once you're ready and I'll check back. Thanks! 一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 09:50, 12 February 2020 (UTC)