User talk:Aatiqanoman5683/sandbox

Great use of pictures because it emphasizes the mechanism of the disease.
Prognosis should be capitalized because it is part of a heading, grammar should be checked.
No Research section, the reader should know what research is being done on Eclabium.
In text citations should be added to the wiki page so reader can automatically go to references.

Aichakay26 (talk) 20:33, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The abstract needs more information. It should provide enough brief summary to understand the important pieces of your condition.
This needs some grammar editing. There are some sentence fragments and other issues.
Good use of images that are already available!
Describing the core actual issue in signs and symptoms would be helpful.
This needs a LOT more citations. Every paragraph should have at least one citation.
This also would benefit from more links to other articles.
Some of your references are not properly formatted. Use Wikipedia's citation tool.

--Sweiner02 (talk) 17:44, 15 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

congenital-malformation-stub

Great job on the formatting and content for your disease One suggestion would be to find a visual diagram that you can put in the causes/mechanisms section, if you are having difficulty finding a graphic image of someone who actually has Eclabium. Maybe elaborate a bit more in the epidemiology section, which countries are the most affected Maybe you can discuss or explain a little more about the ABCA12 gene under the prevention/diagnosis section Jbarbeau1300 (talk) 19:51, 12 November 2020 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aatiqanoman5683 (talk • contribs)