User talk:Aanastos
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Hello! Aanastos,
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I, and the rest of the hosts, would be more than happy to answer any questions you have! SarahStierch (talk) 04:53, 10 October 2012 (UTC)
Your sandbox
[edit]Hi, Aanastos! I was looking at your sandbox, and it's really coming together. Good work! I just wanted to point out that I made a few changes. These were primarily cleanup and formatting (using two equals signs for headers instead of four, moving references to after ending punctuation, wikilinking, etc.) However, I did want to make sure that you're being cognizant of original research. The topic you've picked is a difficult one, just because it's so subjective. You need to be very careful not to accidentally portray the ideas of some groups of people as accepted fact. For example, the sentence "Instead, the two can and should be interwoven." could possibly be better worded as "Instead, [X group of psychologists] believe the two can and should be interwoven." and then supported with a citation. You'll see I've added "by whom?" and "original research?" tags to a couple of bits that I think could and should be improved. – GorillaWarfare (talk) 17:07, 3 November 2012 (UTC)