User talk:Aaannnnnnaaa/sandbox
Prof Garcia's Comments
[edit]Week 2
[edit]You did a great job analyzing the manatees page, Ana. I like that you went through the sources and even noted a discrepancy with the paraphrasing. Your other comments were okay. One was about grammar (not as important) and the other was about substance (more relevant to the task at hand). I think that your answers in your sandbox were also just okay. Think through your answers in the future and make sure to provide more substance. Alfgarciamora (talk) 19:25, 30 January 2017 (UTC)
Thank you for your feedback, as always. :) Obviously I'm not very good at elaborating on my answers, but I'll keep trying.