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This message was delivered automatically by your robot friend, HostBot (talk) 16:09, 15 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Domestic violence in lesbian relationships, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.

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j⚛e deckertalk 05:36, 28 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your thoughtful contribution. I've approved it, because it's better in our encyclopedia than outside of it. I do have a few issues I've tagged, but this was an excellent first article effort, the vast majority of new articles drafts through AfC are never approved. I do think the article lacks our usual sort of idiom for a lead few sentences, and that's something I can explain further if you have questions.
There were a couple things that might have been a title in your draft, and I've taken about half of one and half of another for the current title. The material and sources discuss lesbian relationships in particular, not just same-sex ones, and domestic violence in particular, not just violence in general, so I've used that title, but I'm happy to discuss any concerns you have with that choice.
Best, --j⚛e deckertalk 05:42, 28 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]