User talk:APPU/sandbox

A few stylistic points:

"Bose received an Anglocentric education"
"In 1921 in order to join"
"Bose was held by the Bengal government over a protest under house-arrest"
"he ~~valorously~~ escaped"
"with Adolf Hitler who offered to arrange"
"~~But having got no tangible support, through waterways he left for Japanese-held Sumatra~~" -> "Having received no tangible support he left for Japanese-held Sumatra by submarine", but even then I'm not too happy with the repeated "submarine".
"However impressed the Japanese were by"
I'm also not to happy with "has been theorised by some into a conspiracy but factually unfounded" but will think about that.

Please, feel free to disregard these corrections if you disagree. I am seriously trying to be helpful and not critical. Regards Martin of Sheffield (talk) 15:20, 11 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you and I have changed them exactly like you pointed except for two. I have kept 6th as it is because of the same reason that is the repeated "submarine"; "waterways" seemed good to me but if some of us find a better one, that should be added. I have kept the 8th one same for the same reason as you that is I am yet to come up with a better one. Appu (talk) 10:27, 12 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]