User talk:938HBOM

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Hi there. Part of that text looks OK, but we're trying to build a neutral encyclopedia here, not our opinions or look of things. Some of the content you added seemed to be your "thoughts" on something, if I am correct (see the last half-sentence for an example of what I'm talking about). Please tell me if I got that wrong. Thanks. jj137 (talk) 02:19, 30 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I checked that, and I really don't think you should your opinions. Thanks.--RyRy5 talk 02:26, 30 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks guys. I see what you mean, but the links to the images I included are part of the topic on possible solutions...I realized (after it was removed and I looked at it again)I should not use the first person when contributing to an article (I'm a newbie DOH!). Perhaps the last sentence should have been omitted and the rest left intact? Is there any suggestion how I might refine it? Thanks. 938HBOM (talk) 03:45, 30 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

No, you can always give it another shot. If you want, you can try again and I'll give you my opinion. jj137 (talk) 04:17, 30 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]