User talk:78.235.113.61

The subsection: "Floating Table for guitars and basses" regarding Leduc U-guitars and U-basses should be rewritten and resubmitted. It reads as though it were advertising copy. It lacks objectivity. On top of that, the writing itself is very poor. The description as written barely makes sense and appears to contain erroneous statements. I had to go elsewhere to make head-or-tail of it. While the approach to construction is interesting, it is not without peers. These should be mentioned. The article is about "Electric guitars" in general. It is not a catalog of every inventor that ever felt he had made an innovation. If a subsection is created, as you did, it should include mention of other instruments within the sub-category. If anywhere, this probably belongs among the semi-acoustic instruments and not in a subsection of its own. Again, going to the issue of objectivity, while the U-guitar is innovative, this is not an entirely unique new class of electric guitar. 71.114.56.204 (talk) 15:49, 14 August 2011 (UTC)

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