User talk:5680023.navee
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Welcome, Green Chemistry
[edit]My main advice for your project is to rely on WP:SECONDARY sources. Secondary sources means reviews and books, not journal references. My other advice is to keep the discussion technical. If you Google your topic, you will be flooded with a lot of toxicology and do-gooder talk. Avoid that content. Add your content incrementally. I recommend against replacing large sections unless you are an expert. Happy editing.--Smokefoot (talk) 02:12, 26 November 2014 (UTC)
Green Chemistry
[edit]Hey Sun I was wondering if you think the heading "Green Chemistry" is sufficient in terms of describing your topic - wouldn't something like "PTT's approach towards green energy" or "Views and Activities on Green Energy" be better?
Apart from that your information seems very concise but maybe explaining/having internal citations to those other companies mentioned like TOP would be useful for readers. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gaiabulbanix (talk • contribs) 15:40, 2 December 2014 (UTC)
Peer review
[edit]Hello, Sun I think overall your new contribution is good. I didn't know that you change from green chemistry to PTT Public Company Limited but it's Okay. I see mention TOP, is it just only "Thai oil" or "Thai Oil public company limited". would it be more appropriate to use their full name? — Preceding unsigned comment added by PakpongICCH444 (talk • contribs) 02:58, 5 December 2014 (UTC)