User talk:47.223.210.254
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January 2021
[edit]Hello, I'm Materialscientist. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions—specifically this edit to National Guard Bureau—because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Help desk. Thanks. Materialscientist (talk) 17:32, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
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Hi Materialscientist, The page specifically cites the following issues :
"This article may require cleanup to meet Wikipedia's quality standards. The specific problem is: last section just dies, there is nothing bringing this article to the present even the lede mentions the major changes during the Global War on Terror, there is no reference in the article to the transition to a full position on the Joint Chiefs - the article essentially ends in 1998 (April 2014) This article needs additional citations for verification. (March 2007)"
Could you please clarify how adding citations and multiple sections addressing the lack of material on the Global War on Terror and transition to the full position on the Joint Chiefs is not constructive? — Preceding unsigned comment added by HistoryEditor2021 (talk • contribs) 17:46, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
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