User talk:37.174.229.1

October 2023

Hello, I'm AntiDionysius. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Ho Chi Minh City University of Education, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. AntiDionysius (talk) 20:05, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

HCMUE is one of fourteen leading national universities of Vietnam and one of the two prestigious and largest pedagogical universities, playing a leading role in teacher and lecturer training.

Source: https://vi.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Đại_h%E1%BB%8Dc_tr%E1%BB%8Dng_điểm_quốc_gia_Việt_Nam

It is renowed for its Mathematics and Chemistry Teacher Education program, which are highly competitive at entrance. In the period that admission was mainly depend on the standardized test - Universities and Colleges Selection Examination, the entrance admission score was among the highest scores in Vietnam, along with Hanoi National University of Education.

Source: https://m.diemthi.tuyensinh247.com/ 37.174.229.1 (talk) 20:25, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

We can't use Wikipedia as a source for Wikipedia; furthermore, statements like "it is renowned" and "which are highly competitive" need attribution, and don't appear to be supported by the source you mention - which you didn't cite in the article, anyway. AntiDionysius (talk) 20:33, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

Sorry for some exaggerations. I want to marketing for my university.

1. HCMUE is one of nineteen leading national universities of Vietnam and one of the two prestigious and largest pedagogical universities, playing a leading role in teacher and lecturer training.

-> https://duankhudothi.vn/dai-hoc-trong-diem-quoc-gia-viet-nam/

2. It is renowed for its Mathematics and Chemistry Teacher Education program, which are highly competitive at entrance. In the period that admission was mainly depend on the standardized test - Universities and Colleges Selection Examination, the entrance admission score was among the top 2 highest scores in Vietnam, along with Hanoi National University of Education.

-> https://vnexpress.net/top-9-dai-hoc-co-diem-chuan-su-pham-toan-cao-nhat-4173005.html 37.174.229.1 (talk) 21:04, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

If it's your university and you have a stated desire to "market for" it, you should not be editing the article at all. AntiDionysius (talk) 21:06, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

Thank you very much. Wish you have a nice day. 37.174.229.1 (talk) 21:10, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

Sorry, can you add this:

HCMUE is one of nineteen leading national universities of Vietnam and one of the two prestigious and largest pedagogical universities, playing a leading role in teacher and lecturer training, as pure science research.

It is renowed for its Mathematics and Chemistry Teacher Education programs, which are highly competitive at the entrance. In the period that admission was mainly dependent on the standardized test - Universities and Colleges Selection Examination, the entrance admission score was always among the highest scores in Vietnam, along with Hanoi National University of Education. In 2023, it is 2nd in Vietnam after Hanoi National University of Education for Mathematics Program. 37.174.229.1 (talk) 21:14, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

This is my wish to add about the university

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1. HCMUE is one of nineteen leading national universities of Vietnam and one of the two prestigious and largest pedagogical universities, playing a leading role in teacher and lecturer training, as pure science research.

Citation: "Danh sách 19 trường đại học trọng điểm quốc gia Việt Nam". Retrieved 2023-10-07.

2. It is renowed for its Mathematics and Chemistry Teacher Education programs, which are highly competitive at the entrance. In the period that admission was mainly dependent on the standardized test - Universities and Colleges Selection Examination, the entrance admission score was always among the highest scores in Vietnam, along with Hanoi National University of Education. In 2019 and 2020, it was 1st and 2nd (respectively) in Vietnam after Hanoi National University of Education for Mathematics Program.

Citation

"Top 9 đại học có điểm chuẩn ngành Sư phạm Toán cao nhất". Retrieved 2023-10-07.

"Top 8 đại học có điểm chuẩn ngành Sư phạm Toán cao nhất". Retrieved 2023-10-07.

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I am not good at reference on wiki. Could you help me with this?

Thank you very much for your consideration.

Sorry for any convinience. 37.174.229.1 (talk) 21:33, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

The formatting of the referencing is fine. My concern would be that the text sounds very promotional, and you have said that your aim is to promote the university. AntiDionysius (talk) 21:38, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

Can I add this?

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HCMUE is one of nineteen leading national universities of Vietnam and one of the two prestigious and largest pedagogical universities, playing a leading role in teacher and lecturer training, as pure science research .

It is renowed for its Mathematics (Teacher Education) programs, which are highly competitive at the entrance. In the period that admission was mainly dependent on the standardized test - Universities and Colleges Selection Examination, the entrance admission score was always among the highest scores in Vietnam, along with Hanoi National University of Education.

In 2019 and 2020, it ranked 1st and 2nd after Hanoi National University of Education (respectively) in Vietnam for Mathematics Program. 37.174.229.1 (talk) 21:48, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

Can you allow me add this code? Sorry for any convinience

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HCMUE is one of nineteen leading national universities of Vietnam and one of the two prestigious and largest pedagogical universities, playing a leading role in teacher and lecturer training, as pure science research .

It is renowed for its Mathematics (Teacher Education) programs, which are highly competitive at the entrance. In the period that admission was mainly dependent on the standardized test - Universities and Colleges Selection Examination, the entrance admission score was always among the highest scores in Vietnam, along with Hanoi National University of Education.

In 2019 and 2020, it ranked 1st and 2nd after Hanoi National University of Education (respectively) in Vietnam for Mathematics Program.

__ 37.174.229.1 (talk) 21:57, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

Please stop editing the page. It's been explained that you shouldn't edit the page yourself, because of the conflict of interest you yourself have said you have. AntiDionysius (talk) 23:05, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

I've added the objective parts to the article. --AntiDionysius (talk) 23:16, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

Thank you very much. Can I change

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In 2019 and 2020, it respectively ranked 1st and 2nd (after Hanoi National University of Education) in Vietnam for mathematics.

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in the leading instead history section. Because this is very important for my university, since it remains highest score through the year.

I will not change it anymore. Hope you permit it. 37.174.230.105 (talk) 23:31, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

The point of the article is not to promote what's important to your university, and there is a formula for what should go in the lead section. AntiDionysius (talk) 23:35, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

Can you add addition section with the name “University Ranking” like other university page?

In this page, you put

- 19 national key universities …

- In 2019 and 2020 … 37.174.230.105 (talk) 23:39, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

@37.174.230.105 A ranking in one subject and a thing that's not really a ranking wouldn't seem to merit a whole section on rankings, to me. AntiDionysius (talk) 23:48, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

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Please do not add or change content, as you did at Ho Chi Minh City University of Education, without citing a reliable source. Please review the guidelines at Wikipedia:Citing sources and take this opportunity to add references to the article. Thank you. AntiDionysius (talk) 20:15, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

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