User talk:213.152.162.154

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Happy editing! FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 20:02, 21 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Inner Maldives Holidays (November 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Clearly the company's business is going to involve PR advertising considering it's a travel company, but the current article is literally only focusing with what the company would advertise about itself, note that unacceptable sources include press releases, trivial passing mentions, interviews, news about funding, partnerships or financing. Therefore, focus with actual in-depth third-party news and not anything the company simply initiated or republished.

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SwisterTwister talk 22:08, 1 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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