User talk:173.240.249.204
Greetings, and welcome to Wikipedia! You will find it easier to communicate and collaborate with a usernamed account, rather than anonymously, but it's your choice.
As for Diana Dew, I just happen to be that last editor to make changes to the article -- some minor copy edits. The editor who contributed the bulk of the material has not been active recently. As you can see, the article has been flagged for tone. A Wikipedia article should read like an article you'd find in a reference book; DD's article shows evidence of the promotional magazine pieces that provide much of the references.
Considering references: secondary sources (newspaper reporting, books, independent web sites) are best. Unpublished personal recollections aren't that valuable. A quick internet scan for a DD obituary does turn up a bit of material, but not much.
It would be good to get a precise place and date of death for DD.
There's a lot more to editing, but maybe this note will help get you started. Good editing!
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