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Hello! I just wanted to say good job and I have finished your peer review. Vebrown (talk) 07:06, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Diego,

I like the new organization. Consider rewriting the first paragraph so it is more of an introduction/summary of the overall material.

What about organizing it as Career, and then set years below that? Formation could be a subset of that.

I would have discography be its own section. You could subsection a collaborations on the discography. And maybe an awards section? For personal life, it should just redirect toward the member's specific wiki pages.

I know you are still working on the citations. Nice work. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ArcherOlenska (talkcontribs) 20:54, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]