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Your submission at Articles for creation: Qassem (September 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft has a breezy informal style that is not encyclopedic. The topic appears to be notable, but the draft needs reworking.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Qassem and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Qassem, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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Robert McClenon (talk) 23:56, 16 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, (Click for details)! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 23:56, 16 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Qassem has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Qassem. Thanks! Salimfadhley (talk) 00:07, 17 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Qassem (weapon) has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Qassem (weapon). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 00:33, 17 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

September 2020

Please do not delete or edit legitimate talk page comments, as you did at Draft:Qassem. Such edits are disruptive, and may appear to other editors to be vandalism. If you would like to experiment, please use your sandbox. Thank you. Kirbanzo ^{(userpage - talk - contribs)} 16:36, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]