User talk:宋卉君
daniel orme
[edit]your artice on daniel orme was lifted directly from a webpage at the national maritime museum. this is plagiarism. i fixed it, rewrote it, and added a citation to the original.
muzio clementi
[edit]hello. i deleted one of your edits to the muzio clementi article, as it did not make any sense. the quote's grammar disturbs the sentence that you split when you added it, rendering the entire paragraph unreadable and nonsensical. furthermore, the quote is lifted directly from guardian.co.uk , in a review by anthony holden, but you did not attribute it to him.
i would have tried to fix it up myself, instead of deleting it.... but i couldnt figure out how the quote you added was relevant to the article, or how it should fit in properly. perhaps you can fix it up so it fits in the article.
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