User:Ziyi Yuan

Advertising to children is a good article; it explains the main relationship between food advertisements and children. But I think the article should also research other aspects such as the toy, the clothes, and the electronic products, whether these affect the children's personality or improve the business profit. The opening paragraph also should be rewritten, because it did not narrate the main effects of the advertisement to children. If this article adds some picture, this article will be much better.