User:Yyyyyo3o1

Bio

About me

My name is Jinfei, Xia, I'm 20 years old. I'm from Changzhou, China. It is a small city near Shanghai. I like playing the piano, reading books and playing phone games. I'm interested in suspense films. I think they are very interesting. The plots of the movies are very fascinating. I like dogs. I had a poodle when I was at primary school, I loved it very much.

My Wikipedia interests

I can use Wikipedia to search things I like. For example, if my friends tell me that there is a good movie and I want to see it. I can use Wikipedia to search whether other people think it is good or not, also, I can take a look at the introduction to the movie.

Article Evaluation

I visited the Yike Zen page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: Are any of the links dead(click them, to see), is the article up-to-date and are there grammar errors or sentence.

There are some links dead in Yike Zen page on Wikipedia. When I searched for Yike Zen on Wikipedia, I pulled down the page and saw there is a column in black called Reference. There are 34 references in color of blue. Among them, after the 14th, 16th, 18th and 19th, there are words of perishable link. I clicked them and they showed a page called Wikipedia: Broken Links.

After pulling Yike Zen page on Wikipedia down to the bottom, I saw there is a small line of black words said: “This page was last modified at 19:52 on Sunday 2 February 2020.” Therefore, the article of Yike Zen is up-to-date. This means that Wikipedia collates new material in real time and reflects it on the page. It’s very helpful for me to know the latest news about her.

There are no grammar errors or sentence in Yike Zen page on Wikipedia. I looked at every item listed on this page and I didn’t find any grammar error. I think the page is very precise about Yike Zen’s description. It has correct grammar and no misleading.

In conclusion, the Yike Zen page on Wikipedia is a good passage. The passage contains a lot of content. Yike Zen is my favorite singer. She has a distinctive voice called “sheep tone”, so her songs are soft and sweet. The article on Wikipedia is up-to-date and there is no grammar errors and sentence. But some of the links have broken and these need to be perfected. Most of the links are valid. These let me know more about her.