User:Xyrie
Bio
[edit]About me
[edit]I am a Filipino. I grew up in the Philippines, and I emigrated to the United States at the age of 11. The Philippines comprised of over 7100 islands[1]. My hobby is playing badminton, but I also like playing basketball with my friends. My favorite food is honey walnut shrimp, and my preferred drink is bubble tea. I have two siblings, and we own two cats. Some interesting facts about me are, first, I speak two languages and two dialects. Second, my perfect day would be to watch the sunset from the beach. Lastly, I can understand four dialects.
My Wikipedia interests
[edit]If Wikipedia offered me an opportunity to do content, I would collect accurate information about something I am interested in writing. For instance, my country Philippines where I am originally from, places I want to travel like Japan, etc. Tokyo is famous for its various pillar and architecture.[2] Lastly, I would hope to accomplish writing facts instead of inaccurate data.
References
[edit]- ^ Hernandez, Carolina (18 September 2020). "Philippines". Britannica. Retrieved 22 September 2020.
{{cite web}}: CS1 maint: url-status (link) - ^ Djajic, Natalia (10 July 2020). "THE 25 BEST PLACES TO VISIT IN JAPAN (2020 GUIDE". Nomadasaurus. Retrieved 22 September 2020.
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Article Evaluation
[edit]I am interested in knowing more about Taekwondo. On October 19, 2020, it was my first time joining Taekwondo. As far as I know, Taekwondo is a way of learning self-defense and other techniques used in fighting. I want to gather more information so, I visited the Taekwondo page on Wikipedia and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: citation, age, and grammar.
Age
[edit]The article was last updated on October 15, 2020. As I was scrolling through the article and checking the history, I noticed that there are new current citations added to the article.
Citation
[edit]The article contains a lot of information about the history of Taekwondo from different websites. I reviewed the references, and I noticed that there are 67 citations. Also, the details are from a reliable source because the most popular top-level domain(TLD) used were ".com" and ".org" The sources contained no bias and no dead links. Every link brings you to an appropriate site.
Grammar
[edit]As far as grammar, the words used in the article are very professional and formal. There are no grammar errors and no bias. Correct grammar is necessary when writing an article because that's how people tell if the article is reliable or useful.
Summary
[edit]Overall, the article about "Taekwondo" is useful for gathering information about the activity taekwondo. The pieces of information are reliable. Also, the evidence taken from other sources contain citations. In addition, the article was composed by a professional writer.